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  3. After agonizing over sharing a work in progress my best friend and I have agreed I will text her one sentence of the book each day: that is the mode for “ongoing feedback.” I’m very happy with this and it has resulted in some excellent editing pressure...
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After agonizing over sharing a work in progress my best friend and I have agreed I will text her one sentence of the book each day: that is the mode for “ongoing feedback.” I’m very happy with this and it has resulted in some excellent editing pressure...

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    After agonizing over sharing a work in progress my best friend and I have agreed I will text her one sentence of the book each day: that is the mode for “ongoing feedback.” I’m very happy with this and it has resulted in some excellent editing pressure and much more focused opening.

    Let’s see how it develops!

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      After agonizing over sharing a work in progress my best friend and I have agreed I will text her one sentence of the book each day: that is the mode for “ongoing feedback.” I’m very happy with this and it has resulted in some excellent editing pressure and much more focused opening.

      Let’s see how it develops!

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      Really, if you are concerned your first paragraph isn't... catchy enough. Consider how you would write it if you had to send it as a text. Really cleans out the fluff and helps it get to the point in a way that can matter in an opening.

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